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    Sounds cool to me...

    but it got a bit of lack of skills.
    The guitar thingy is in the beginning a bit robotised..
    I would have wanted it more purer.
    The violin thingy on the background had t change smoothly, not in those bigg steps.
    You also could have changed the melody somewhere.

    For the guitar I recommend this tutorial: http://www.youtube.com/watchv=PImC21_
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    Please follow it, and your songs will be a lot better!

    Please don't be angry because I gave you critism, I only want to help you.

    ~Adjeye-3

    12spike22 responds:

    not angry at all
    Finally sombody who accually gives critizem instead of just voting down and not telling me anything. And i will check out that video.
    i do know how to do alot more with guitars (accual strum patterns and making it sound more human...) i just got lazy...
    i also see where ur coming from with the violin in the background.

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